Teacher Feedback - Unit 2WWW: great project! Excellent range of images with clear connections to your contextual references. EBI: not so sure about the drawing around a car with light, but there is a clear link to explore. Take a look at this piece by Naoya Hatakeyama: http://www.thegorgeousdaily.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/02/Slow-Glass-by-Naoya-Hatakeyama-3.jpg
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Teacher Feedback - Unit 2WWW: I really like the abstract quality to your work! The light trails from the moving car are highly successful. EBI: perform some colour edits in Photoshop to increase the vibrance of a small selection of images.
To improve I am going to edit some of my images from my photo shoots in Photoshop. I will increase the vibrance of a 'small selection' of my current work to experiment with more brightly coloured photo graphs. Progress - Critical Analysis Feedback - Unit 2WWW: some very insightful writing. Confident and well composed. EBI: give some specific examples of how you are going use his work to inform yours.
From this critique I will use the EBI advice to 'give specific examples of how' I am going to use Martin Roemers's work to inform my own. Progress - Mock Exam Update(44 Marks - D Grade) Teacher Feedback/Critique:-Really strong images and technical experimentation! Well done! You have clearly understood the work of Hatakeyama and have explored how Richter uses paint in his images. To improve: Start to refine your focus through my photographs of water (think about puddles and other ways of recording reflections in water)
With the feedback given I am going to take a shoot using puddles and smaller scales of water. Progress - Mock Exam Feedback(Current Grade So Far... - 40 Marks - D Grade) Teacher Response/Critique:-
Very well written critical analysis. This has informed some of your photoshoots. You started to focus on the theme of water To improve: not convinced with your last shoot. I can't see how this links to your previous shoots, which focus on water. Explain carefully how this shoot is a development of your ideas and link this to your contextual references. With the feedback given I decided to delete the photoshoot that was uploaded as I agreed that it did not link. Therefore, I will conduct another photoshoot related to the theme involving water and buildings. I have also edited more of my work on photoshop and have critically analysed my work with www and ebi. I also finished my critical analysis of Richter Gerhard and explained my work further. Progress |
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